"You"

"You"

A Poem by Dr Ayaz chandio
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me and life will always be agreed on you....! just wrote simply..hope you would like this friends.

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Life asked me "what is your destination"?
I replied very contentedly "you",
when I asked life” what is your destination?"
life smilingly said  "you",
thus I and life have the same destination that is "you".

© 2012 Dr Ayaz chandio


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This was really interesting one!
I did like it :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

Thanks Natty...stay blessed.
Awww, I don't know but I liked it! :))

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Interesting write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thank you dear
Really nice job!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thanks dear
This was very interesting. Short, simple, and intriguing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Is "you" the inner you or an outer entity?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

You is all.... primarily inner and reflection as outer.
excellent well put , the journey of the self.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thanks :)

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Dr Ayaz chandio
Dr Ayaz chandio

Karachi,Sindh.



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