One love One Life.

One love One Life.

A Poem by Dr Ayaz chandio

As the dewdrops are poured 
onto the leaves of trees,
how sweetly do birds sing 
the everlasting melody of life.

As the sunlight reaches 
the core of plants,
how wonderfully do flowers unfold
the beautiful miracles of life. 

As the fragrance of flowers
touches the soul of butterflies ,
how meaningfully do butterflies reflect
the ethereal image of life.

And as the beautiful memories
of beloved shine within my heart,
how lovingly do my heartbeats reveal
the very meaning of life.

© 2013 Dr Ayaz chandio


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Dear Ayaz Chandio,

I find this to be a bit sporadic. You go from trees to bird to sunlight to flower to butterflies, but that works for this piece. It's like wind, lol.

Ah, a nature inspired piece and a reflective tone brings about a calm mood. I find the flow of the first stanza really easy and sweet. How true it is that the natural things reflect that of the supernatural. The little things people miss are sometimes the greatest works of art.

It may be small, but I love how you say, "the." It makes a difference because it inspires me to believe that all of this is connected and meant to be in place, ya know.

How thought provoking.

Thanks for sharing.

Sincerely Victorious

God bless

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

.this is not perfect,but it's something heartfelt. and i believe in learning,i really appreciate whe.. read more
Wow, I got chills! This is beautiful. A very nice read!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

Thanks dear.
Max_E_Stone

11 Years Ago

You're quite welcome
Words flow very nicely. Good work, I love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

Thanks dear.
The poem is beautiful. I like the hope and positive energy of the poem. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thanks dear Coyote,i truly appreciate your inspiring and kind words.
This is very very beautiful. it is filled with color and goodness. excellent composition. wow! david

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

Thanks for sharing your precious views dear,My pleasure.
This is very nice..sometimes I think people do not appreciate the things around them..It is a beautiful world if we only take the time to look..Katihe

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

Thanks dear.
Beautiful job. It is always great to read joyous poems. We may not always feel like this in our busy concret and steel realities. But poets remind us of ideals and how we wld rather be.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

My pleasure.thanks for your kind words and very inspiring review dear.
Beauty around us shows the meaning of life.
I enjoyed really well written and expressed poem
good job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

Thanks dear.
Very touching and eloquent. It's a very special when people really appreciate the small beautiful subtleties of life. Great write. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

Thanks for sharing your views precious views dear.
Beautiful. The rhythm of life and of love and nature makes this poem one of which to inspire :) Good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thanks dear.

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Dr Ayaz chandio
Dr Ayaz chandio

Karachi,Sindh.



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"I am the meaning of your silence,and you are the beauty of my words"(aZ) i love art,literature and nature in all its aspects.. and i have been writing ,since i have been touched by love.I usually .. more..

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