One love One Life.

As the dewdrops are poured 
onto the leaves of trees,
how sweetly do birds sing 
the everlasting melody of life.

As the sunlight reaches 
the core of plants,
how wonderfully do flowers unfold
the beautiful miracles of life. 

As the fragrance of flowers
touches the soul of butterflies ,
how meaningfully do butterflies reflect
the ethereal image of life.

And as the beautiful memories
of beloved shine within my heart,
how lovingly do my heartbeats reveal
the very meaning of life.

Reviews

[KeeD]

It's almost like a hymn of love, life and beauty. Very well written :)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks for appriciation.

[Kelsey]

I love the repetition in this. It has great structure and is very beautifully written. Nicely done. x

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[Be myself!]

Beautiful!

[KurKota]

Very nice. It creates a very nice visual picture with the use and structure that you used. Very good writing, I think.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks for sharing your views here.

[Adam Whitworth]

very nice

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like this...it has clarity and meaning, it exalts nature and also the transcendental quality of spiritual observation in natural things..it reveals the cyclic nomenclature of worldly existence through harmony in verse... or more simply put, it is quite beautiful.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks for sharinh your precious views and thoughts,i am glad you liked it and wrote an inspiring review.

[junaid altaf]

you have made "how" to answer and that is wat caught me!
a beautiful piece of words!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

My pleasure,thanks dear.

[junaid altaf]

your welcome

[Lexi Nicole]

Very beautiful. I love the imagery! Each line is like a brushstroke and the poem itself a painting. Lovely work!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Dear thanks for sharing your precious views.

[Barbara Walker]

Beautifully expressed!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thank you.

[Krista Weiss]

Aww! Really cute poem! Love it! :)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.