One love One Life.

As the dewdrops are poured 
onto the leaves of trees,
how sweetly do birds sing 
the everlasting melody of life.

As the sunlight reaches 
the core of plants,
how wonderfully do flowers unfold
the beautiful miracles of life. 

As the fragrance of flowers
touches the soul of butterflies ,
how meaningfully do butterflies reflect
the ethereal image of life.

And as the beautiful memories
of beloved shine within my heart,
how lovingly do my heartbeats reveal
the very meaning of life.

Reviews

[Mervyn]

Your poem is well constructed and it flows smoothly.
A good read. Well done.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[N!LoC]

ooo very nice... all the emphasis is on "life"....

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[Mockingbird]

very lovely. sounds like something coming from someone in the throes of euphoria to be aware of all the small details.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks for stopping by and sharing your views dear.

[Renée]

Reads like a chant of life & love..I like how it embraces the dewdrops on leaves..birds, plants and finally down to man...encompasses all of nature..just like Love.. Sweetly done!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks for sharing your precious views dear.

[Renée]

My pleasure

[KAOlmsted]

Nice. Thank you for sharing this with us.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

My pleasure,thanks, love and blessings.

[KAOlmsted]

Du är varmt välkommen.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

sorry i don't understand this dear? would you like to write this in English or let me know which language is this so i could understand it with the help of Google.

[KAOlmsted]

xD sorry..."you are most welcome"...in Swedish ;-)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

same here,thanks. hope you didn't mind for asking that.

[KAOlmsted]

no worries ;-)

[eglantine]

Is that first quotation mark supposed to be there?

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

No it's not dear,thanks.

[Jack...]

Very beautiful indeed.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear..love and blessings.

[Constance Payne]

Well Written.I did notice in the 2nd line a double "of" - purposeful?

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear,and that extra "of" is there just as a mistake ,here i correct it.

[Constance Payne]

I know when I write I often skip thought. I appreciate when some one let's me know. If is Beautiful.

[Constance Payne]

* it

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

yes it is very pleasing when someone lets us know what we as well as many others don't come to notice usually.