"A night is not only about a night"

"A night is not only about a night"

A Poem by Dr Ayaz chandio
"

about one of a sleepless nights of life...in a sleepless universe of my being !

"
A Night is not only about
the darkness in the sky
the brightness of the stars,
the world that has fallen asleep,
but a night is also about
the untold tale of silent lips,
aching hearts,longing eyes,
it's about the journey of love,
loneliness and memories
a night is not only about a night,
a night is about the life
that is lived ages in a night !

© 2014 Dr Ayaz chandio


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

but a night is also about
the untold tale of silent lips,
aching hearts,longing eyes,
it's about the journey of love,
loneliness and memories
a night is not only about a night,
a night is about the life
that is lived ages in a night !
I loved these lines. Very true and relatable poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

3 Years Ago

Thanks you so much, it's my pleasure that what i have wanted express and put in words have delivered.. read more
Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

Yes.......you're welcome



Reviews

but a night is also about
the untold tale of silent lips,
aching hearts,longing eyes,
it's about the journey of love,
loneliness and memories
a night is not only about a night,
a night is about the life
that is lived ages in a night !
I loved these lines. Very true and relatable poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

3 Years Ago

Thanks you so much, it's my pleasure that what i have wanted express and put in words have delivered.. read more
Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

Yes.......you're welcome
There are a lot of great metaphors that I like in this one.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

4 Years Ago

Thanks dear Ahmad .
I like the flow of the words, it also brings a pretty picture of nighttime to my mind. It is true that there are some that go and do things during the night, it's not just a time to sleep, depending who you are.

Good Job

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the review dear.
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

5 Years Ago

^^ You're welcome
Love the title. I enjoyed reading, good job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

5 Years Ago

Thank you.
I agree with your logic.
"a night is about the life
that is lived ages in a night !"
I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the very good closure. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

5 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind and motivating words dear Coyote ,it's my pleasure.
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Indeed where can we find this rare creature well done good read

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the review dear.
Well put together, well balanced, and a fine central image !

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the review dear Leslie philibert.
Or perhaps the night is about someone that has never lived in the light but always in darkness. These people have never lived. Nice poem, I enjoyed the meaning in this write. Valentine

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

5 Years Ago

Thanks dear Valentine,it's nice to hear from you. i have been very absent here to give time to my fr.. read more
Simple yet straightforward. It's true; night is a closed book, a lot hidden beneath the cover, a lot to be discovered. That is why I wake up with the moon. Smashing piece. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. i appreciate your words dear.
Falling Leaf.

5 Years Ago

No trouble at all.

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe

Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5

Stats

536 Views
9 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on December 8, 2014
Last Updated on December 8, 2014

Author

Dr Ayaz chandio
Dr Ayaz chandio

Karachi,Sindh.



About
"I am the meaning of your silence,and you are the beauty of my words"(aZ) i love art,literature and nature in all its aspects.. and i have been writing ,since i have been touched by love.I usually .. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..