Insomniac

Insomniac

A Poem by Dr Ayaz chandio
"

Just as i feel in the nights enlightened by the light of love....

"
let us suppose that
the countless stars 
sparkling all the night long 
were once insomniac lovers
like you and me,

Let us suppose that 
we are stars too
longing all the night endlessly
in the infinite sky of love !

© 2017 Dr Ayaz chandio


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I believe more star on earth than in the sky if your words were true. I liked the poem a lot. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is so tender and loving. Suppose we were stars...great lines

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

3 Years Ago

Thanks dear.. lots of love!
We're all just particles of some much larger entity, let us all shine our light while we can.

Very sweet sentiment.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

3 Years Ago

Rightly said, Thanks for the review dear. stay blessed.
a fine poem that breathes life into a well known scenario...great !

Posted 3 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and review dear.
Very thoughtful and creative. I liked it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

3 Years Ago

Thanks dear Najam us Saher for your time and the review.
Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

you're welcome ☺

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Dr Ayaz chandio
Dr Ayaz chandio

Karachi,Sindh.



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"I am the meaning of your silence,and you are the beauty of my words"(aZ) i love art,literature and nature in all its aspects.. and i have been writing ,since i have been touched by love.I usually .. more..

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