Gratitude

Gratitude

A Poem by Dr Ayaz chandio
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i have expressed the gratitude symbolically here,yes life is full of symbols,and all the symbols tell us how to live it.

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learn from birds, the beauty of life.
they fly high up in the sky,
but they don't forget about
the trees down on the earth,
where they finally return to rest.

when you achieve the heights in your life
love them like birds.
likewise if you ever fall downwards,
fall like the drops of rain,
which fall bringing with them,
the hope of prosperity.

© 2012 Dr Ayaz chandio


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Beautiful and positive words in this poem. Your words remind me of the Native American belief in the combination of nature and human happiness. Need both to create a good place to live. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Leo
Very thoughtful, energetic, and inspiring..honestly it was an absolute beauty of a read..magnificent!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

4 Years Ago

Thanks for the review dear.
So very true.. The symbolism you've created with birds and rain drops is lovely and so very true. I really enjoyed this one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

My pleasure...thanks for your inspiring words dear Zoya.
Nice and well written imageries
with a deep, truthful and positive message.
I your concept I see humility in gratitude
and the importance of being down to earth
and always keeping true to our essence.

WELL DONE!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

Thanks for sharing your precious views dear dear.
This reminds me of a certain beautiful poem I had read a few years ago. Serene, makes me want to fly with birds, giving me enormous inspiration, at the same time just ink on paper, silently giving messages in the breeze;-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

Thanks for sharing your views dear.
silence acts out beauty in mornings rise and evenings exhaling breath.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thanks dear
:) well done! i love this poem... talks about nature :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


So good. ^^ great write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful and positive words in this poem. Your words remind me of the Native American belief in the combination of nature and human happiness. Need both to create a good place to live. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful read.. Done it once again!! Keep up this good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem, a very positive note.
I love the metaphors, and how even rain is presented positively.
It's a very nice message, to appreciate everything and see something positive in anything - I agree that everything has a good side.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dr Ayaz chandio
Dr Ayaz chandio

Karachi,Sindh.



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"I am the meaning of your silence,and you are the beauty of my words"(aZ) i love art,literature and nature in all its aspects.. and i have been writing ,since i have been touched by love.I usually .. more..

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