Gratitude

Gratitude

A Poem by Dr Ayaz chandio
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i have expressed the gratitude symbolically here,yes life is full of symbols,and all the symbols tell us how to live it.

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learn from birds, the beauty of life.
they fly high up in the sky,
but they don't forget about
the trees down on the earth,
where they finally return to rest.

when you achieve the heights in your life
love them like birds.
likewise if you ever fall downwards,
fall like the drops of rain,
which fall bringing with them,
the hope of prosperity.

© 2012 Dr Ayaz chandio


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Beautiful and positive words in this poem. Your words remind me of the Native American belief in the combination of nature and human happiness. Need both to create a good place to live. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

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Beautiful message you have here. This is wonderful and well written, great write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Feelings and written art... I really loved what I perceived to be your message and the simile that you've created using birds.



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Awesome! Really liked this :)

~Destiny

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Beautiful :)

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You have a wonderful sensitive soul and it shines through in your writing thank you for sharing

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You are a very deep thinker, Doctor.
And a very good writer.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Beautiful statement. Wisdom whispers, it does not scream and shout. There is so much wisdom and insight in this piece. I love it!

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very beautiful

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Beautiful symbolic approach to a lesson we must be taught. "even if they fly high up in the sky, they don't forget about the tress down on earth"..If only we could master this approach to life..and fall gently as the rain..

Posted 8 Years Ago


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A meaningful take on life and how best to live it, presented with optimism and verve. A wonderful read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Dr Ayaz chandio
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"I am the meaning of your silence,and you are the beauty of my words"(aZ) i love art,literature and nature in all its aspects.. and i have been writing ,since i have been touched by love.I usually .. more..

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