Gratitude

Gratitude

A Poem by Dr Ayaz chandio
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i have expressed the gratitude symbolically here,yes life is full of symbols,and all the symbols tell us how to live it.

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learn from birds, the beauty of life.
they fly high up in the sky,
but they don't forget about
the trees down on the earth,
where they finally return to rest.

when you achieve the heights in your life
love them like birds.
likewise if you ever fall downwards,
fall like the drops of rain,
which fall bringing with them,
the hope of prosperity.

© 2012 Dr Ayaz chandio


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Beautiful and positive words in this poem. Your words remind me of the Native American belief in the combination of nature and human happiness. Need both to create a good place to live. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
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Love it! So very true. I always like to use birds in my poems, they carry such great meaning :)

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Kes
This is great. :)
I really like this. It's got a good feel and flow to it, and I like the message. Keep up the great work!
Kes

Posted 8 Years Ago


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wow i love poetry and this is a perfect example on what great poetry is nice work:))

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Ver well written, and easy to comprehend. Great point behind this.

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Like how you use the birds free as they are they still return to nest.

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Very nice, Ayaz! I especially liked this part:

likewise if you ever fall downwards,
fall like the drops of rain,,
which fall bringing with them,
the hope of prosperity............!!!

Thank You!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is very positive and true. A wise outlook to have on life and feeling. And the pleasent calm is present very much in your poem. In a way I could call this very philisophical. Well done. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is a beautiful and sincere poem. Good job!

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Dr Ayaz chandio
Dr Ayaz chandio

Karachi,Sindh.



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"I am the meaning of your silence,and you are the beauty of my words"(aZ) i love art,literature and nature in all its aspects.. and i have been writing ,since i have been touched by love.I usually .. more..

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