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"WAKE UP"

"WAKE UP"

A Poem by Dr Ayaz chandio
"

this is the hardest fact. so need we not wake up as "one world"?

"

A beautiful poem,

a meaningful writing,
a tragic love story
a wonderful book,
a lovely song

And sweet and soft music,

all the vast technology
and its business based usage,

still can't meet the hunger 
of helpless poor child,

still can't provide peaceful,

secure and prosperous life,

to the innocent passengers of life,

in those parts of this world,
declared as third world...!

and it makes a sense 
having all these wonderful qualities ,
how helpless we all are...... 
and thus humanity feels shameful
being surrounded by 
narrow boundaries and laws,
that for the better living of self
we have forgot 
what life 
actually means.....................……..?

© 2012 Dr Ayaz chandio


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Good read and write. We are spiraling towards the way God made us, slowly but surely we will become. Lives are not lost, they return as we make progress to change a world once apathetic and cruel. More people are aware and care about what happens in this world.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

agreed dear Brandon..thanks for inspiring words.



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Good read and write. We are spiraling towards the way God made us, slowly but surely we will become. Lives are not lost, they return as we make progress to change a world once apathetic and cruel. More people are aware and care about what happens in this world.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

agreed dear Brandon..thanks for inspiring words.
Profound and challenging to all of us in the more affluent areas of the world. Life is never just in global terms.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thanks dear john.i agree.
A very brave poem, to attempt to tackle such a vast and emotive subject...Although the writing is transparent I'm not sure how else one might go about it really; its very interesting to include in a poem, the fact that a poem has very little power over the life and death of those suffering everyday. It says a lot to me about the purpose of writing and of art in a world that needs some kind of help that cannot seem to be given. I also think that the fact that the english in the poem is a little bit broken actually serves to make the poem have greater depth as it's another level of communication that has to be deciphered by the reader. It removes it from us and therefore makes it easier for us to realise the aims and purpose of this particular poem...Very though provoking, well done :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review dear Bertie,i truly appreciate your precious thoughts and honest view on this,.. read more
well written on a deep issue.thank you for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

My pleasure,thanks dear.
Innocent passengers of life! Beautiful. I loved this, especially the feelings you elicited through your writing. While it's a vulnerable piece, it's also too true to ignore. Great work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Indeed well written. Yes, we have the means, but sadly the will is lacking on so many fronts. There is much hope and progress being made, but there is a vast amount of work to be done also. But most of all it begs the question whether we can really call our selves civilised, when materialism creates such monumental imbalances in the world. Food for thought indeed. Thanks for the request.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:) i can't say a phrase for this poem.. you are really concern in your society.. great write :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quite thoughtful indeed. I found that there was many different aspcets of life in this, many things to think about, to question. And then it all comes together in that last line. Nice job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Really interesting write. Yes, we all need to wake up and face the problems in front of us. ^^

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Karachi,Sindh.



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"I am the meaning of your silence,and you are the beauty of my words"(aZ) i love art,literature and nature in all its aspects.. and i have been writing ,since i have been touched by love.I usually .. more..

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