"WAKE UP"

this is the hardest fact. so need we not wake up as "one world"?

A beautiful poem,

a meaningful writing,
a tragic love story
a wonderful book,
a lovely song

And sweet and soft music,

all the vast technology
and its business based usage,

still can't meet the hunger 
of helpless poor child,

still can't provide peaceful,

secure and prosperous life,

to the innocent passengers of life,

in those parts of this world,

declared as third world...!

and it makes a sense 
having all these wonderful qualities ,
how helpless we all are...... 
and thus humanity feels shameful

being surrounded by 
narrow boundaries and laws,
that for the better living of self
we have forgot 
what life actually means.....................……..?

Reviews

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Good read and write. We are spiraling towards the way God made us, slowly but surely we will become. Lives are not lost, they return as we make progress to change a world once apathetic and cruel. More people are aware and care about what happens in this world.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

agreed dear Brandon..thanks for inspiring words.

[Coyote Poetry]

"we have forgot
what life actually means.....................……..?'
26,000 people will die in Africa of starvation. I went on food and water missions to Africa in the 1990-1996. We will spend 1.2 trillion on war and 5% of that on human care. I pray for a better leader. War is a waste of money and human life. Need to fight hunger and sickness. Need to protect Nature. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Siren]

Intriguing and wonderful.... I like this a lot, great write.

[Michael G.]

Nice work and content, Doctor.
Excellent points...

[.....]

The grammar is a little off in this. But the message is expressed well. We do need to wake up and see what's going on around us. Action needs to be taken to make the world a better place. To leave it to our children in a better condition than when we knew it.

Blessings, Tammy

[by S.D.]

Meaningful

[Aravind]

A great great message!!!
Heart-touching!!!

The end just wraps up the whole poem in a mere few words! Very well done!

[Priscilla Sayers]

Let the Revolution of Humanity begin with the Poets...
And that would be a genuine Priscilla Moore quote.:)

[Priscilla Sayers]

Yes, I am the majority of us have. Yet another wonderful piece brings light on a subject we are only now speaking up to. Bravo!

[J. J. Nightingale]

A GOOD MESSAGE HERE ..


JASMINE ..