"WAKE UP"

this is the hardest fact. so need we not wake up as "one world"?

A beautiful poem,

a meaningful writing,
a tragic love story
a wonderful book,
a lovely song

And sweet and soft music,

all the vast technology
and its business based usage,

still can't meet the hunger 
of helpless poor child,

still can't provide peaceful,

secure and prosperous life,

to the innocent passengers of life,

in those parts of this world,

declared as third world...!

and it makes a sense 
having all these wonderful qualities ,
how helpless we all are...... 
and thus humanity feels shameful

being surrounded by 
narrow boundaries and laws,
that for the better living of self
we have forgot 
what life actually means.....................……..?

Reviews

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Good read and write. We are spiraling towards the way God made us, slowly but surely we will become. Lives are not lost, they return as we make progress to change a world once apathetic and cruel. More people are aware and care about what happens in this world.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

agreed dear Brandon..thanks for inspiring words.

[zero binty]

As events unfold, you cannot have tragedy without hope. If all you see is the depression, you paint a darker picture. Whereas I act like a complete @$$hole to everybody that thinks they know me, my true friends laugh because they know the lengths I go to help. The fact that we need to wake up as a whole is clear, but if you wake up without hope, you might as well stay asleep.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Great message, only in a perfect world we will all one day wake up and smell reality. But alas, we've become far too dependent on selfishness and greed to care about the things that really matter the most in this world.

[Kiari Sabon]

love it nice write

[Angelic Surrender]

Great message. Love it :) Good work

[Maryam]

The message is clear, and it's a good write overall. Good job :)