Global Warming

Global Warming

A Poem by Aynsley

I see the ruines,

I see the sea.

I see what has become of thee.

The ocean floors all destroyed.

The forests gone,

animals extinct.

And everythings all wrong.

The heat waves are closing in.

And everythings thrown to a bin.

There's nothing lively, and nothing great.

And this had never been our fait.

Global warming has taken it's place.

And now it's here for us to face.

© 2010 Aynsley


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wow nice words, sound as in my world its self
ancient architect's, came to the spot it which, was offered with, alooot of s**t!
And Altered it, untill the time when god will sit, the ones who deceived him,
our screaming, gods not a b***h!! Hes asking who will explain, there playing,
PLEADE THE 5TH, and NOT IT!! Wekk aynsley thats just a few Thoughts n Wits,
of the mr shook da author with,

Posted 10 Years Ago


I liked this poem because it is so true.
I liked the first line. It was my favorite.
You just dived right into it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a melancholy spin~delivered much like a sorrowful sigh~ well done~
the state of momma earth~ the atrocities human have commited against their own mother~ will obviously be our undoing as a species~

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Aynsley
Aynsley

Sunshine Coast, Maroochydore, Australia



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