Let's Azonto

Let's Azonto

A Poem by ayosonolowo
"

Put on your dancing shoe, and let's azonto, forget that girl, because she's an azontoa, but let's mimic her style

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She signal an amazing intention,
with her acrobatic movement,
she place her right leg slightly in front,
she twisted on the whole leg,

can you do the zonto,

she knee she bend and move her hips,
that girl is an Azontoa,
she raise her hands up and pop her hips,
can i mimic her style?,

let do the zonto,

her finger accrossed her right wrist,
she move her right hand forward and backward
am gonna mimic her style,
let's do the zonto,

can you do the zonto?,

i call it Zonto,
she call it Azonto,
you call it Abontoa,
but i say she's an Azontoa,

i must mimic her style.

© 2013 ayosonolowo


Author's Note

ayosonolowo
Thank you for reading, hope you know how to azonto.

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Lol...i know that dance all right...but seriously i couldn't see any Fuse or Wizkid's Azonto o!!! but you try in your description "she move her right hand forward and backward"..well nice piece and attempt

Posted 6 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much cassy
very detailed i could picture the whole dance im my mind . i doubt if id do the dance as well as it was described though : ) nice poem i liked it

Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
I don'tknow how to do the azonto, but it sounds fascinating.

Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

Yea, thank you
YOLO...let's dance! Lol

nice imagery. Fun read.

Proof read it more closely tho.
WRITE ON

Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

Yea,.. Thanks alot.
Lovely detailing in the poem which describes the girl that did the azonto. The way you use your descriptive words to make the whole poem come alive makes the reader see it and read it slowly to get each detail that you were talking about.
Keep writing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

Thanks alot noble poet.res
Annie S

7 Years Ago

you're welcome :)
A very nice poem on the azonto. Thank you for sharing this write along with the dance...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

^^~^^ :).............................
ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

Lol ^~^^~^^~^
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

LOl.............
I say, life is too short not to dance. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

Really? K to what, thanks for the review.
Well written. I like the cadence of the poem.

"she knee she bend and move her hips,
that girl is an Azontoa,
**she raise her hands up and pop her hips,
can i mimic her style?,"

Great stanza. Great images and pulls the reader in here.

Your first stanza is great as well. I really like this poem. Thank you for sharing.



Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

Thanks alot,........ I appreciate your review.

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ayosonolowo
ayosonolowo

Kano, Christainity, Nigeria



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My names are David Ayo Olowoeyo, a local Nigerian young writer born in Kano but originated From kogi state, and writings has been a path of me since when i was at 0 level, though i stay local and have.. more..

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