Turn to God

Now i have turn to him and i think it is time for my rest

You ask me to turn to you o' God,
And now i have turn to you o' God,
You gave me the assurance of rest,
But they i see in your chamber unreleased,

Am still wandering around so restless,
In the land you created so below,
Who denied you unknown,
Who denied your superiority,
They i see so full of rest,
Wandering here below so joyful,
Here i come under you supremercy,
Here i come o' benevolent the merciful,
In total seclution,
Only to ask in humbleness o' superior,
Give me my rest.

Author's Note

Thank you for reading and please tell me if it is poetic and if it is not do tell me too.

Reviews

[ayosonolowo]

Hmm, just challenging God, thats all.

[Nwanna Onyeka Benedict]

it is a nice poem. can you please explain the fourth in the first stanza and the fiveth in the second stanza.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yes, we must turn to God...before it is too late.
It's nice to read a poem about faith this morning. Thanks for sharing.

[ayosonolowo]

you're welcom

[Sami Khalil]

You are so right. We all need to turn to God in any faith we believe in...Splendid...:)

[Annie S]

Your vocabulary it quite amazing and I should say that it very inspirational. There's so much to cover about Christianity and you have presented it well.. Nice Job! :)

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot

[Annie S]

you're welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

Your faith shines through here with a lot of poignant questions to God. A splendid one...:)

[Cali Sylvers]

nice poem about christianity!

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot , i really appreciate you stoping by