Turn to God

Turn to God

A Poem by ayosonolowo
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Now i have turn to him and i think it is time for my rest

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You ask me to turn to you o' God,
And now i have turn to you o' God,
You gave me the assurance of rest,
But they i see in your chamber unreleased,

Am still wandering around so restless,
In the land you created so below,
Who denied you unknown,
Who denied your superiority,
They i see so full of rest,
Wandering here below so joyful,
Here i come under you supremercy,
Here i come o' benevolent the merciful,
In total seclution,
Only to ask in humbleness o' superior,
Give me my rest.

© 2013 ayosonolowo


Author's Note

ayosonolowo
Thank you for reading and please tell me if it is poetic and if it is not do tell me too.

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Hmm, just challenging God, thats all.

Posted 6 Years Ago


it is a nice poem. can you please explain the fourth in the first stanza and the fiveth in the second stanza.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Yes, we must turn to God...before it is too late.
It's nice to read a poem about faith this morning. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

you're welcom
You are so right. We all need to turn to God in any faith we believe in...Splendid...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Your vocabulary it quite amazing and I should say that it very inspirational. There's so much to cover about Christianity and you have presented it well.. Nice Job! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

Thanks alot
Annie S

7 Years Ago

you're welcome :)
Your faith shines through here with a lot of poignant questions to God. A splendid one...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


nice poem about christianity!

Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

Thanks alot , i really appreciate you stoping by

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ayosonolowo
ayosonolowo

Kano, Christainity, Nigeria



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My names are David Ayo Olowoeyo, a local Nigerian young writer born in Kano but originated From kogi state, and writings has been a path of me since when i was at 0 level, though i stay local and have.. more..

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