Awaiting day

Awaiting day

A Poem by ayosonolowo
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Yea!

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The awaiting day
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Alas! For a day will come,
Of heavy rain and storm,
When dry bones will arise,
And roting flesh reform,
To the sound of crying bells,

I and you will be there,
To face the fate we've rear,
The good the bad and worst,
And everyone in mire,
Each! Awaiting for their fate,

The wicked act you've let,
The holy laws you've waste,
And the shadow standing by you,
Will be your judge at last,
To tell if you've lived in true,

Let us walk upright.
For hell is not a place,
For the kind of us to rest,
But paradise is the place
And we will be there if only we want.

© 2014 ayosonolowo


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ayosonolowo
Really awaiting

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Well done for writing this poem, we all wonder about the 'waiting day' let's hope for good fortune.

Posted 6 Years Ago


"The wicked act you've let,
The holy laws you've waste,
And the shadow standing by you,
Will be your judge at last,
To tell if you've lived in true,

Let us walk upright."

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice words to ponder. We will reap what we sow.

Posted 6 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

6 Years Ago

Yea, thak you
"Let us walk upright.
For hell is not a place,
For the kind of us to rest,
But paradise is the place
And we will be there if only we want."

Wise words. I consider myself informed. I just found your name is David. :) There are a lot of Davids here.

Posted 6 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

6 Years Ago

Yea, thats my name, i appreciate your view
Words of wisdom and encouragement. We have to chose the paths in life and every one has consequences. A good message...Bravo.............

Posted 6 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

6 Years Ago

Than you very much, i appreciate
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).................

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ayosonolowo
ayosonolowo

Kano, Christainity, Nigeria



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My names are David Ayo Olowoeyo, a local Nigerian young writer born in Kano but originated From kogi state, and writings has been a path of me since when i was at 0 level, though i stay local and have.. more..

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