Reflecting Pools

Reflecting Pools

A Poem by Brette Medb

The words fall flat,
the beauty and mystery
too much to be expressed
on paper with pen.
Steel gray,
Endless blue,
Mystic green,
a vortex of feeling
revealing hidden secrets
of a complex mind.
Reflecting pools
of unspoken thought
and deep emotion.
Oh how your eyes
sparkle with a thousand
more words than ever graced
your tender lips.
The truth revealed
In an endless shifting of emotion.

© 2010 Brette Medb

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They say that the eyes are the windows to our soul. It looks as if yours captures and appreciates the beauty all around you...
beautifully done...

Posted 8 Years Ago

intriguing stream of consciousness...

Posted 9 Years Ago

it is all in the eyes ~ beautiful

Posted 10 Years Ago

You do a pretty good job at expressing it though.
Incredible work!-- very passionate.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

now thats a deep thought

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on December 5, 2010
Last Updated on December 5, 2010


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