Embracing Love's Forgotten Companion (Renewed)

Walking down the aisle

Of holy matrimony

With devotion for the aura

Of her vanity on his mind

The groom and his adorning bride

Accompanied love

On a journey

To find

A forgotten companion

Embracing and finding commitment

As time and infatuation drew them together

In favor of their union

Were wedding guests in awe of an endearing pact

Sitting in their pues looking at

Who would be involved in

Such a pivotal decision

Tried and true

Embracing Love's Forgotten Companion

Gave everyone a preview of hope

For partaking in lifelong vows

Drawing a man closer to his wife

Solidifying the reason why

This sacred partnership

Will set an example

On how to live a more fulfilling and prosperous married life

Reviews

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

this is quite brilliant :D

nice job

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Marriage...what an interesting, conveluded, beautiful and yet painful idea. Is it natural? Is there such a thing as true romance (other than the movie)? This one asked questions between the lines...I really enjoyed that. Nicely done.

[Krista Weiss]

Another great poem!

[kublakhan27]

Uplifting in an enigmatic sort of way...the mention of her vanity raised my eyebrow a bit as well haha Great piece :)

[Trigorin]

Not bad. I really don't like your habit of including the piece's title and italicizing and bolding it, but that's a minor issue. This seems maybe a little too matter-of-fact in delivery, but you do manage to tell the story fairly well. Good work.