Trying Harder / Seventy Hours

Trying Harder / Seventy Hours

A Poem by B30

Just a song I thought maybe I could be using for my band. Not sure what you guys think? I'd like to know about your interpretation as well.

Seventy hours are spent on making this 
Tower, who could've possibly 
Be greater than what you are thinking of achieving 
Howard, where is your party 
Gown, they're down the f*****g drain 
Here we become another psycho-maniac again 

Sometimes, I spend too much 
Sometimes, I need your, your rusted eyebrows 
They sweat like mushed mouths 
Sometimes, I regretted all the things I said 
But practice makes it a little bit perfect 
Cause' after all, I'm only trying harder 

Can you fly me a jet suit, I wanna' leave this Earth 
I wanna' be with myself for the most part 
But you are still the fence between me 
And myself 
Why won't you be tumbling down 
I'm only trying harder, I'm only giving Christmas 
But you're still in the way of my plans 
I'm only halfway flattered, ingenuity squandered 
But thanks to you, I'm always back on my two feet 

They should've called me in 
They should've checked me when I called in sick 
They were just sighs and relieves on the deck 
They're sweating in Rome's latest digital tech 
I'm taking points all across the board 
And I felt like I'm still not worthy 
However I've done all that I can 
And I hope this future's pretty 

Only time will tell 
Only I can live in hell 
But pictures aren't really that perfect 
If you ask a black-eyed child 
I'm only doing what I recall 
Not you're favourite anymore 
Do you still remember me 
Or am I just a distant entity 

So here's a present 
Open it up and fathom 
Your dreams collection 
I hope you like them 

© 2013 B30

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Added on May 20, 2013
Last Updated on May 20, 2013




My real name is Benny. B30 is my alter-ego in everything I do. I aspire to be pretty much a: director, host, actor, artist, writer and a poet. Although these are just a few, I love writing rhy.. more..

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