HELLO

HELLO

A Poem by MS. BABy
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Tension filled energy.....

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His phone rings,

Hello,

And she answers

Hey, what are you doing?

He answers in a most seductive raspy 2am voice…

Nothing, is there something that you want me to do?

Yes

I would like for you to come to my hotel room, and lie next to me

Just lie here, and talk to me

Face-to-face

So that i can feel the warmth of your breath upon my skin

And

Smell the fragrance of your body….i love how the heat feels when it comes off of you.

Laughing at her ever so lightly…he says..

Is that all you want me to do with you?

She is smiling on the other end of the receiver

And says….a pause in-between

Off course not…I want you to hold me

Hold me like I am a lover that you never want the sexual act to conclude..

And stroke me…knead my body with the delicate touch of a man touching a woman for the very first time

Tell me secrets inside of the darkness that no one else knows and allow me to empty my temple of sacred vows, given only to you in this obscured ritual

Love me like a friend…

But caress me like a new love

Engulf me inside of your sorely missed arms

Are you there she asks…she has embarrassed herself….

Quietly he says….

Leave a pass key for me at the desk with a note…

A note….she says

Yes a note…telling me just how much you love me

I will be there in about 30 minutes

Can I tell you now that I love you…

No he says quickly, I want you to write it in a note so that I can take it with me to remember this moment when you are gone and not with me

She says in her soft and demure voice

I will always be with you….you are the one I will want forever but shall never quite have…

He says…

Tonight is all that matters and tonight I am all yours

Anything you want I will do

Anything you need I will give

I am pulling up to your hotel….and am walking to the front desk retrieving your key and note….smiling just like I asked…

I am walking down your corridor and sliding the key into the lock, it has opened

I am looking at you….and watching you watch me

Closing the door to the outside world….Hanging up this damn phone….

Staring at you….

Hello darling….

She says….kiss me

He kisses her, undresses

 Climbs into bed and says begin….

 

BABy©2011

© 2011 MS. BABy


Author's Note

MS. BABy
i wrote this with a wonderful poet in mind....thank u for your inspiration Jibey...smile

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"I will be there in about 30 minutes" grounded this nicely. S**t like this can often spiral outta control, and start to read like dirty Hallmark. Nicely done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


thank u Sir E

Posted 8 Years Ago


This was very good! you put the dialogue together very well. Great job!! it kept me reading

Posted 8 Years Ago


@Everett.....lol...u r so beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


Booty Call! Jk

Lovely flow, I felt like I was the fly on the wall...superb.

Posted 8 Years Ago


hello michael, and thank u very much

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Wonderfully written

Posted 8 Years Ago


I have had some very wonderful male poetic inspiration @victoria Bunnie...thank u so much...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow... wow, i love this so much. I love how its so sweet, cute, romantic, you wrote this like a story, like a real situation... so dreamy, so comforted. Love this a lot... seriously. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


beautiful and enjoyable, a great moment in love. I might try this....LOL

Posted 8 Years Ago



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MS. BABy

San FRANCISCO, CA



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I am just me, a poet that enjoys words and intrigue...I am inspired by others and love the musing over life...I am poetry...smile. I'm an innovator in the poetry world and am CEO of my own Production.. more..

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