A Poem by MS. BABy

Tension filled energy.....


His phone rings,


And she answers

Hey, what are you doing?

He answers in a most seductive raspy 2am voice…

Nothing, is there something that you want me to do?


I would like for you to come to my hotel room, and lie next to me

Just lie here, and talk to me


So that i can feel the warmth of your breath upon my skin


Smell the fragrance of your body….i love how the heat feels when it comes off of you.

Laughing at her ever so lightly…he says..

Is that all you want me to do with you?

She is smiling on the other end of the receiver

And says….a pause in-between

Off course not…I want you to hold me

Hold me like I am a lover that you never want the sexual act to conclude..

And stroke me…knead my body with the delicate touch of a man touching a woman for the very first time

Tell me secrets inside of the darkness that no one else knows and allow me to empty my temple of sacred vows, given only to you in this obscured ritual

Love me like a friend…

But caress me like a new love

Engulf me inside of your sorely missed arms

Are you there she asks…she has embarrassed herself….

Quietly he says….

Leave a pass key for me at the desk with a note…

A note….she says

Yes a note…telling me just how much you love me

I will be there in about 30 minutes

Can I tell you now that I love you…

No he says quickly, I want you to write it in a note so that I can take it with me to remember this moment when you are gone and not with me

She says in her soft and demure voice

I will always be with you….you are the one I will want forever but shall never quite have…

He says…

Tonight is all that matters and tonight I am all yours

Anything you want I will do

Anything you need I will give

I am pulling up to your hotel….and am walking to the front desk retrieving your key and note….smiling just like I asked…

I am walking down your corridor and sliding the key into the lock, it has opened

I am looking at you….and watching you watch me

Closing the door to the outside world….Hanging up this damn phone….

Staring at you….

Hello darling….

She says….kiss me

He kisses her, undresses

 Climbs into bed and says begin….



© 2011 MS. BABy

Author's Note

i wrote this with a wonderful poet in mind....thank u for your inspiration Jibey...smile

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thank u trouble, and i am eager to observe ur trouble...smile...

Posted 9 Years Ago

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well, you have a knack for creating intimate scenes, very well done.


Posted 9 Years Ago

Raven i so love ur comments...and yes to all of ur observations..

Posted 9 Years Ago

A wonderful read composed with elements that accent humanity in my opinion. The need for love, desire and such leads us sometimes to do certain things we would not normally do.

Posted 9 Years Ago

A saddened and sensual affair of mystery and revealed youth, well done, good read.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This reminds me of someone who is already taken or lives to far away to be together all the time. It is a romantic tale but slightly sad at the same time. The conversation flows easily and sounds like one that people would really have. You have done well with this piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago

"allow me to empty my temple of sacred vows, given only to you in this obscured ritual" This is so well written!! Baby, you have talent.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Jibey is overwhelmed... What can I say? Such an imaginative tour de force - and such a wonderful scenario ... smiles back

Posted 9 Years Ago

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OK. You've gone off the charts with this one. Increbible work, leaving my head reeling. Again...

Posted 9 Years Ago

A beautiful poem. Those late calls. Calling you to come over. Are the nice parts of life. Good when two people can find peace in each other arms. Thank you for a excellent poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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