A Poem by MS. BABy

Tension filled energy.....


His phone rings,


And she answers

Hey, what are you doing?

He answers in a most seductive raspy 2am voice…

Nothing, is there something that you want me to do?


I would like for you to come to my hotel room, and lie next to me

Just lie here, and talk to me


So that i can feel the warmth of your breath upon my skin


Smell the fragrance of your body….i love how the heat feels when it comes off of you.

Laughing at her ever so lightly…he says..

Is that all you want me to do with you?

She is smiling on the other end of the receiver

And says….a pause in-between

Off course not…I want you to hold me

Hold me like I am a lover that you never want the sexual act to conclude..

And stroke me…knead my body with the delicate touch of a man touching a woman for the very first time

Tell me secrets inside of the darkness that no one else knows and allow me to empty my temple of sacred vows, given only to you in this obscured ritual

Love me like a friend…

But caress me like a new love

Engulf me inside of your sorely missed arms

Are you there she asks…she has embarrassed herself….

Quietly he says….

Leave a pass key for me at the desk with a note…

A note….she says

Yes a note…telling me just how much you love me

I will be there in about 30 minutes

Can I tell you now that I love you…

No he says quickly, I want you to write it in a note so that I can take it with me to remember this moment when you are gone and not with me

She says in her soft and demure voice

I will always be with you….you are the one I will want forever but shall never quite have…

He says…

Tonight is all that matters and tonight I am all yours

Anything you want I will do

Anything you need I will give

I am pulling up to your hotel….and am walking to the front desk retrieving your key and note….smiling just like I asked…

I am walking down your corridor and sliding the key into the lock, it has opened

I am looking at you….and watching you watch me

Closing the door to the outside world….Hanging up this damn phone….

Staring at you….

Hello darling….

She says….kiss me

He kisses her, undresses

 Climbs into bed and says begin….



© 2011 MS. BABy

Author's Note

i wrote this with a wonderful poet in mind....thank u for your inspiration Jibey...smile

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Wow! It made me misty-eyed reading this. There's someone I wish I could have that conversation and that connection with, though he is so far away! Very nicely done, BABy! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

you just have a wonderful sensual way of putting this together, and really works whilst I read :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

"Love me like a friend…

But caress me like a new love"

Full of passion...Interesting and well crafted writing... :)))

Posted 9 Years Ago

thank you kim, and hello...

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Such a passionate & beuatiful write. Enjoyed the read.
You did a wonderful write here.

Posted 9 Years Ago

thank u styxx...i love romance so very very full of feeling...i am glad u enjoyed this...

Posted 9 Years Ago

I like the passion that flows from this piece. Its gripping and pulls the reader into the story, and the way that the converstion flows betwee the two feels completely genuine, just adding to the affect of the poem. Very well done, and simply gripping

Posted 9 Years Ago

hello lambi thank u and am lookinf forward to u also

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wowwwww. This poem is beautiful and paints a picture of an extremely romantic situation between two people. It's very real and easy to relate to at the same time. I'm pleased. Great work. I look forward to reading more of your writing. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

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