STAGES OF VENGENCE III...THE KILL

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STAGES OF VENGENCE III...THE KILL

Like a moth drawn

To a flame

That’s the way love goes…

He says my name as I receive

An unknown caller to my Htc

WOW he comin straight and

Direct to me…

I feel the butterflies break lose

In my stomach and they are headed

Straight up into my throat

They coat my teeth….

I say…

Ummm…as I clear my voice

To say ever so softly…Speak ur piece

He says..Why u playing this game

You know this cat is a lame

If he letting you roll him like this

You know dam well it’s my lips you

Fellin when he places them tired kisses on

Your sweet face

This is not the time nor the place for

You to try to do what you are doing

I say why should you care what’s being done

By me

Don’t you have your playmate

And aren’t you giving her fantasy and fun?

Look I refuse to let you do this to me,

Make me look bad…share what I had

With uhh…with him

I love how you think of this and how

They feeling…

You didn’t think nothing about me when

My mind was reeling over the

News of your nuptials…

So blues to you okay

Anyway…

You are ruining my spa day

I did something that I have never done before…

I placed a multicolored nail on the key next door to green…I used to be his queen and now I’m just a fiend as I

Cut him off midstream

I know he steamed because

I’m cryin

I’m lyin to my gurls

That that was a call to make me

Happy…

He callin me back

I’m so nervous I really

Don’t know how to act cuz

I didn’t expect him to be

On me

He still got that pull on

My heart, because I’ve never

Stopped loving him

But…

I gotta shake that love thing

Off my skin cuz he belongs to her

So I answer…

And say in an ugly blur…

WHAT DO YOU WANT?

My man is counting out my stacks

To give me what I want and what I need

I don’t have time for your prison bleeds

Oh baby this…

Oh baby that…

He like…woman you are killin me

This is fact, but..you

Betta use that vic you got

And use him to the full

Cuz I still got pull

Whether I’m down or I’m hot

Now he fuming

And I’ma little scared

But I ain’t forgot

That this is just the beginning

And right now…

I’M

WINNING…

Baby©2010

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like this, powerful. And seems confident at the end. I love your descriptions that seem so poetic, like this part here:
"Like a moth drawn
To a flame"
Correction:
feelin
"Fellin when he places them tired kisses on"

[biggerthenu]

very creative nice job

[Coyote Poetry]

Wow is my response to this amazing tale. The photo and words made the story have life. I like the description and the places you took me in this chapter. Thank you for sharing this amazing story.
Coyote

[K.C. Zbryk]

This entire set is amazingly well done and you draw the reader into the series so well that its impossible to put down. Full of raw passion and emotion that pulls the reader into the undertow of your thoughts. You crafted a work of art here

[Teri B]

I read the whole thing, and kept my comment till now. Spoken word more than rap, this narrative is energetic and raw, and I can almost see the performance of it in my mind's eye. Well done!

[POETIC VIXEN]

okay the pic is da bomb...the prose...just ill...