DIAMOND'S STAGE OF VENGEANCE

DIAMOND'S STAGE OF VENGEANCE

A Chapter by MS. BABy
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DIAMOND'S STAGE OF VENGEANCE

stages of vengeance

I’m looking at this fool
With evil in my eyes
As he just so carelessly
Drops this piece of news into my lap

See I dun took a bad nap
And HE…don’t know who I am
That man went and married something
Way beneath me

I see
So he figures that if he
Move on he can save me
But
I just don’t die like that

Never will I accept this Ice pick
To my tatted back
His name in bold letters

I remain calm
And say as a matter of fact:

“Well
He ain’t on no more
So why should I worry about
A n***a that’s on the living deads floor

But
You
On the other hand
Ain’t you supposed to be his man?
We’ll see what he got to say about that

Unless you scared
And really don’t know how to act
I think that we should go shopping
Take my mind off this bit of bad karma”

BECAUSE
Me and you
Gotta do some
Being seen together...
All of this I say to myself

I’m gonna get him
Her
His world
Now
We gonna see if he wished
He would have kept me for his gurl

BABy©2010…The DIaMoND


© 2012 MS. BABy


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thank u so much EMF... I needed that...just added a new one slowly but ...smile.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Keep adding as much as you like. You are creating a new noir, and it's damn good. Forceful and raw. Absolutley wonderful

Posted 8 Years Ago


thank u so much, I have got a couple of more to add to this.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Strong and real. I like this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Poetry and strength in this chapter. I like the woman desire and goals. Her direct approach and no fear attitude is making the story strong. I like the ending of this chapter.
"We gonna see if he wished
He would have kept me for his gurl"
Thank you for sharing the tale. A excellent chapter.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


I am loving dis...........

Posted 9 Years Ago



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