Holes

Holes

A Poem by Brad Dehler

Everyone
    Has holes in their thinking
Evermore in their speaking
Our dubious task is
    To not fall inside

© 2022 Brad Dehler


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Seems that each day, perhaps each season or term, presents data relevant from the past. That in turn leave those 'holes' for yet to be decisive completion. Research covers a multitude of factors as you surely know. For many, holes are an essential.. we need dig in order to discover more but with care - else there could be a landslide!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

1 Month Ago

Quite right! Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts!...



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ahahaha .. i love this as one trips over one's tongue to many times .. or fits a foot in there ... i see humor in this one and like it! i also appreciate the brevity ..
E.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


a complex view of speaking and thinking....damned if you do, damned if you don't.... do no go too deep inside...tread lightly....or you might find yourself in the hole....which isn't bad because you might actually learn something new....so holes aren't necessarily a bad thing....for either.
well done
warmly,
B

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

1 Month Ago

Thank you for the compliment Betty. Complete view is quite nice to hear. I also like your in-depth a.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

You are very welcome Brad🌷
Warmly
B
Love this double edge sword of meaning...A very nice flow of words

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

1 Month Ago

Thank you Chere!
Seems that each day, perhaps each season or term, presents data relevant from the past. That in turn leave those 'holes' for yet to be decisive completion. Research covers a multitude of factors as you surely know. For many, holes are an essential.. we need dig in order to discover more but with care - else there could be a landslide!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

1 Month Ago

Quite right! Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts!...
A thinking piece. I really like it (as my thinking is quite porous). ~Jim

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

2 Months Ago

Thank you. You are a humble person, such a good quality. Thank you Jim
Brad Dehler

2 Months Ago

Thank you. You are a humble person, such a good quality. Thank you Jim
so very true, we can all relate I think. -carl

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

2 Months Ago

Thank you Carl. It is important for my work to be as relatable as possible. I know some of it is dar.. read more
carl

2 Months Ago

I can appreciate that - something I struggle with is over thinking and rewriting once a idea occurs .. read more
Brad Dehler

2 Months Ago

Thank you. That is an interesting word, thanks for looking it up for both of us. Affectation
Love this engage the brain before you speak or we fall in what we regret. Lol thank you for sharing

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

5 Months Ago

Thank you!
Fabulous first read, very relatable..Thankyou

M.w

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

5 Months Ago

I appreciate your vote on the matter :) Please tell me more about the second and third... :)
Masked writer

5 Months Ago

Indeed I will when the time is right
How well spoken and well put.
As someone who has fallen many times over on the inside,
I can relate.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

5 Months Ago

Keen observation. Thank you so much
light and ashes

5 Months Ago

Welcome, very much.
I love your writing. It's a lot like mine! This piece is so true. Keep writing and keep your readers engaged

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

5 Months Ago

Thank you Jenni. I appreciate what you have to say. I'm glad you enjoyed it

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Added on August 5, 2022
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Brad Dehler
Brad Dehler

Salem, OR



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