Holes

Everyone

    Has holes in their thinking

Evermore in their speaking

Our dubious task is

    To not fall inside

Reviews

[Ken e Bujold]

enjoyed the thoughts this little gem provided Brad. yes we all have holes in thought and opinions, but I also enjoyed going down those rabbit holes by times as they lead me to some very interesting thoughts of my own as I try to understand how and why theirs are so opposite my own

ken

[Brad Dehler]

Yes, for certain. A blessing and a curse. To be unique and with a different message. At the same time we want to belong and be understood. I really appreciate you catching on to the "rabbit holes" that ensue from this writing.

[Light and Ashes]

How well spoken and well put.
As someone who has fallen many times over on the inside,
I can relate.

[Jenni Bailey]

I love your writing. It's a lot like mine! This piece is so true. Keep writing and keep your readers engaged

[Lorry]

Excellent. Succinct and to the point, which is right down my poetic street. Or at least used to be at least, but ever since that pesky lockdown thingy, I can't remember much.
Long covid: the gift that keeps on taking!

[Ciara]

True words spoken.
Lies and stories are never without holes.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you for sharing your thoughts Ciara

[R.J Calzonetti (Siniste..]

I realize I’m not the best at conveying what’s needed in a review, but I love this style of yours, you always have something profound to say, especially at the end of your works. Thank you for sharing.

[Brad Dehler]

I really appreciate you saying this. I take it to heart. So glad you find the value.

[KWP]

this reminded me straight away of the song lyrics 'slip slidin' away ...' ha ha ha and off she goes into the black holes of thought ;)

[Brad Dehler]

Lol very well. I think that is an excellent place to be- black holes of thought ;)

[DIVYA]

Oh those holes can be so deep...so damning...and sometimes, its such a struggle to avoid them.
Superb wordplay and great message.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you, I really appreciate that DIVYA!

[DIVYA]

My pleasure Brad :)

[Amber Stone]

HA! gezzees...this one is: just a masterpiece!
congrats, Brad,..thanks for sharing it.
sincerely,
Amber

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you so much Amber. I am blown away by your compliment, dont know what to say. THANK YOU!

[willweb]

It is only when we are not looking outward that we find ourselves on that narrow path leading to one of these holes.
Very cool indeed.

[Brad Dehler]

Appreciate that "cool" vote, very much. Made my day sir