Bring Forth the Light

From the book Dose (2016)

Do not tremble in the dark

For that which lurks

In the dark

Trembles in the light

Bring forth the light

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Paraphrased from Genesis 1: "And, in the beginning the earth was without form, and void; and, darkness was upon the face of the deep; and, God said, 'Let there be light,' and there was light."

Well, Brad,
You can easily tell my propensity to pontificate has already exceeded your succinctly deep verse.
I've found that what hides in the dark is scared of what light reveals … which your words have already so concisely and brilliantly spoken.

Love a poem that imparts so much in so little space.
Brava, Poet! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you so much for this input. Thank you i am humbled by your compliments. Loss of words here. Much much much appreciated!!!

[FGFRANKLIN]

I really like this. The light sends the shadows fleeing. "Light is sown for the righteous, and gladness for the upright in heart." Psalm 97:11 There is joy where there is truth and truth is revealed by the light.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you sir! Absolutely. I appreciate your sincere response. This is so real and you brought it to light.

[NormaZ]

I love your poem, so optimistic, going from the dark to the healing light. So much packed in this short poem!

[Brad Dehler]

It warms my heart to see that you love this poem. Thank you thank you!

[Zatoichi]

Great poem, beautifully concise.
One nit to pick have I- you could lose the first word in the second line. The “For” as used there is archaic and unnecessary, imho.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you for the input. I am meticulous in my word choice and so I do appreciate your take on what can be left out. I left in "for" to transition to a level of encouragement rather than stating facts. That was the logic.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I gravitate to shorter pieces like this. Brevity is quite a forte to have. Well done, Brad!

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you very much. Yes the grand majority of my writing is concise, dense and brief

[Kelly Scheppers]

Perhaps Shakespeare said it best. "Brevity is the soul of wit". Remember that!

[Brad Dehler]

Duly noted :)

[Eddie Phillips]

Again simple but powerful. The light is needed in this world of increasing darkness.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you Eddie, appreciate you

[Red Brick Keshner]

No trembling! Right, now that is set in stone the light shall illuminate this darkness that causes so much trembling!

[Brad Dehler]

Let it be so! Thank you mr Frederick Kesner

[R.J Calzonetti (Siniste..]

Excellent use of the small amount of words used. Really inspiring, and I enjoyed this poem very much. Shows that there is more than one side, the dark is not any stronger than the light; they fear each other

[Brad Dehler]

Yes, yes. Thank you so much for this review RJC. Truly inspiring. You are spot on

[Chris]

Words that "touch" softly and to live with...

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you Chris for stopping by and giving remark

[Scott Kris]

Boom!
The best way to think.

I love this.

Thanks for sharing.

Scott

[Brad Dehler]

Lol, yes. I love your take on this Scott. Boom! Yeah, its quick but can be intense.