Reflection

Reflection

A Poem by Bhumika Devkota

Funny how they all fly,

Chasing their dreams

Never looking back to see what they have missed,

Forgetting the childhood promises and the broken trust,

The small moments and the misunderstandings,

A broken smile and a fixed glass,

The passion and the hatred,

The wishes on a shooting star

And the candles on birthdays

The path of hope and the fire burning bright,

Funny how they all fly,

Looking for dreams and things to cherish,

When all along it was right there,

Present in their memories

© 2017 Bhumika Devkota


Author's Note

Bhumika Devkota
Wow, uh, it's been a long time. Last time I posted was about half a year ago... Hopefully I will be back with new work. Anyway, feel free to give me advice on how to improve this. It's a two minute write with barley any edits so I could use some advice. Thank you!

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Who, that is amazing. It makes one truly think what they are chasing after. That really all one would want is right in front of them. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Bhumika Devkota

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment!!
Time flies with desires and wishes...a beautiful poem...I liked it...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Bhumika Devkota

6 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Bhumika Devkota
Bhumika Devkota

Albany, NY



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Hi! I am Bhumika Devkota. I am the youngest from my extended family, which makes me a little - I suppose a lot- spoiled at times. I live with my parents and my older sister, who is currently a senior,.. more..

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