A Love/Hate Mixtape

A Love/Hate Mixtape

A Poem by Brooklyn Darkchild
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Relationship in a rut? Tired of having the same old argument over and over again? Do you know what s/he is gonna say before s/he opens his or her mouth? Here's what to do...

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Don't

Don't do it

Not One More Time

Do NOT hit Pause

Then: press Rewind

You might not

Know it

But you've said

Enough

Let's Fast Forward

Past this Tired Stuff

Try a New Song

In a Different Key

Hit the Stop Button twice

Don't Bother me

© 2008 Brooklyn Darkchild


Author's Note

Brooklyn Darkchild
My daughter the Immaculate Madonna Star said if I don't stop writing poetry she's gonna start

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Yes!!!! This is beautiful and full of passion and truth. How many times can you listen to the same excuses before finally saying, "Enough, I've heard it all before." Great piece of art!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Giggles at your daughter's threat. I love this little tidbit of poetry. Its just sassy enough to say something smart, but not so out there that I have to roll my eyes - you know? Awesome write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I hear a fresh beat, reminiscent of the 80's on this track. I like the simple, heavy impact of the words. I'm expecting this to be a song soon.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DC

You...KNOW you can write....so dont even hubilize

I love it..

"But you've said

Enough

Let's Fast Forward

Past this Tired Stuff "

~ come on now....thats real as rain

and Ms. Madonna needs to get her behind behind the pd n' pen again

Blesssssssssss



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Let the 'Star' write - because it would be a disaster if you stopped! Loved the 'rap' style of the word play; I know a lot of people (sadly) will relate to the content. Short poetically sweet and to the point - great write!

God's Blessing
Phillozofee

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wise words........so often we say things for affect, just to hurt.........I like the way it reminds of a VHS, and if only we could hit that stop button more often!


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 29, 2008

Author

Brooklyn Darkchild
Brooklyn Darkchild

Cincinnati, OH



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I am a mother of nine; grandmother to twelve, and counting. I first fell in love with words when I learned to read�at age three. In high school I had several short stories printed in the .. more..

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