Stamp of Life

Stamp of Life

A Poem by Ralphy

 

Stamp of Life
 
Life is the sweetest flower
that one can smell,
deep inhales,
take it all in, and fill the lungs
with the exquisite aroma
of pure exhilaration
as it pumps your heart
with the elegances
of what is, could,
and shall be in this precious
moment framed in time.  
 
This breathtaking action
cracks the exact second
that both birth and death
had collided,
and in just a wink of time,
the dust cleared,
revealing to you
a cataclysmic of yourself
walking in the aftermath
of passion,  from that instance,
creation crafted you
into existence,
you realized, life  
does not get any
better than this…
 

© 2009 Ralphy


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What a beautiful tribute to the simple grace of being alive...I love the way you approach this. Unique and eloquent!
"This breathtaking action
cracks the exact second
that both birth and death
had collided"

I love the idea that birth and death are colliding...so true! The entire world is filled with a collision of sorts, and you've truly showed how wonderful it can be to simply express a joy in being alive.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I see what you mean. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great - a nice simple poem with a deep meaning.

Enjoy life otherwise it will blink by. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow.. something has you stirred lately in your writings.. such passion flowing from your heart in the last couple of writes I am reviewing.. really refreshing.. this one on life.. full of energy!!! Thank you again so much.. waking me right up tonight!!! =)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thats right you must enjoy every moment while you still can for just being alive in it's self is a miracle we must embrace.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful tribute to the simple grace of being alive...I love the way you approach this. Unique and eloquent!
"This breathtaking action
cracks the exact second
that both birth and death
had collided"

I love the idea that birth and death are colliding...so true! The entire world is filled with a collision of sorts, and you've truly showed how wonderful it can be to simply express a joy in being alive.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ralphy
Ralphy

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