Stamp of Life

 

Stamp of Life

 

Life is the sweetest flower

that one can smell,

deep inhales,

take it all in, and fill the lungs

with the exquisite aroma

of pure exhilaration

as it pumps your heart

with the elegances

of what is, could,

and shall be in this precious

moment framed in time.  

 

This breathtaking action

cracks the exact second

that both birth and death

had collided,

and in just a wink of time,

the dust cleared,

revealing to you

a cataclysmic of yourself

walking in the aftermath

of passion,  from that instance,

creation crafted you

into existence,

you realized, life  

does not get any

better than this…

 

Reviews

[Collette]

What a beautiful tribute to the simple grace of being alive...I love the way you approach this. Unique and eloquent!
"This breathtaking action
cracks the exact second
that both birth and death
had collided"

I love the idea that birth and death are colliding...so true! The entire world is filled with a collision of sorts, and you've truly showed how wonderful it can be to simply express a joy in being alive.

[Emmie]

I see what you mean. :)

[John Morris]

This is great - a nice simple poem with a deep meaning.

Enjoy life otherwise it will blink by. Well done.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. something has you stirred lately in your writings.. such passion flowing from your heart in the last couple of writes I am reviewing.. really refreshing.. this one on life.. full of energy!!! Thank you again so much.. waking me right up tonight!!! =)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

thats right you must enjoy every moment while you still can for just being alive in it's self is a miracle we must embrace.