God's Tea Cup

no desc.

I hate to step on the glow between the cracks
Hell emanating through and up
Because I've been cast out of a higher story
Come high water with any luck
Below me douse the fire
Above- an empty cup

Author's Note

i guess the poem was trying to tell me... God saves.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful message in the poem. Hard to see the proper ways sometimes. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Nice writing here....nice message....

[dreaming dame]

I really like this:) But... wat's the higher story you have been cast out of? That is, if you even care to tell me. Miss you

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

I have to admit, I read the author's note as well as the poem three times...Third line down...I don't get it, please fill me in. Though I am far from religious I do see what you are saying.

[Dr. Wood ?]

the chalice maybe? I am not a religious man but the concept is fascinating....Very good this