Oceanflesh

Oceanflesh

A Poem by Poe Redd
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haiku

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I feel heavy as the ocean
as if this flesh
is overburdened

© 2013 Poe Redd


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Very good use of words. You made your point loud and clear. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


deep. like you are:) nice one, the oceans big, maybe you'll find a mermaid to aid in your burden

Posted 10 Years Ago


Interesting.. I like it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is quite good :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


So intense and powerful!!

Top haiku :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on April 29, 2013
Last Updated on April 29, 2013
Tags: ocean, water, flesh, blood, cut, blah, stuff, sad, down, up, music, hurt, whatever, heavy, heart

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Poe Redd
Poe Redd

Ontario, Canada



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