The Coming

The Coming

A Poem by Poe Redd
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A letter from our dear X-Queen... to the King.

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Claw marks through dirt

Tails high, heads down

Eyes slitted

Walk by twos

By tens

By hundreds

My Army.

 

The wolves are coming

To announce my Coming.

 

King-

Engage a conscript army

Appoint your best friend general

Enrage me, king of Sunday

Before I host your funeral.

 

The wolves are coming

To announce my Coming

I am coming for the throne.

 

With love,

     X-Queen.

© 2011 Poe Redd


Author's Note

Poe Redd
A short one now. Nothing fancy.

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Extreamly cool

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This is exciting

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intriguing ..

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I am in love! It gave me chills. Reading the last stanza I couldn't help but shiver. I like that you repeated "The wolves are coming/ To announce my coming" it gave the impact for the last line. I bow at your feet :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love what your doing here, nice!!! MORE!!!
:) :) :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oooo I like:) Awesome pic totally illustrates it:) good job

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on May 2, 2011
Last Updated on May 3, 2011
Tags: letter, crown, king, queen, battle

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Poe Redd
Poe Redd

Ontario, Canada



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