Want

Want

A Poem by Poe Redd
"

something a little cheesy in my own way

"

WANT!

This is INSANITY!

Lost for words and clarity.

One look from you,

I fall into

The heated haze of vanity.

 

WANT!

It's getting stronger!

I don't know how much longer

My heart can take

The selfish way

My daydreams feed my hunger.

 

WANT!

It's really real now!

I wanna tell you how I feel now.

Boy, I'm just afraid of how

You'd take it; if you take it without question,

Don't mistake my 'WANT'

For 'CHILDISH OBSESSION.'

© 2011 Poe Redd


Author's Note

Poe Redd
Shut up, Privates. x3 This is not cute! I! Am not cute! ... :3 meow.

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Push me down the plank if you will, this poem is still cute:) ... back when we were so innocent in our own ways, back before we lost one of our own

Posted 11 Years Ago


Love it!! Captures crush so nicely :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really liked it, how you ended it and how each stanza takes the want a step further. Great job!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like it its so sweet

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aww that's sweet. Actualyy I love the first two lines. Insanity and clarity. I like the shouting in each verse to start. Really good, eye catching too.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I toally agree with DD:) Totally cute!:):):) Lol so bite me to:) actually..... don't cuz it hurts lol very nicely written though:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Don't mistake my 'WANT'
For 'CHILDISH OBSESSION.'

that part is the best and pulls everything together :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is cute:) and full of genuine feelings:) love it:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I just Loved your Want
Not at all cheesy
Excellent poetry :0)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on July 5, 2011
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