What is the word?

What is the word?

A Poem by Balletmonster
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I dont...know

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What is the word that describes, being happy?
What is the word that makes you feel good?
What is the word you tried to use but couldn't remember?
What is the word that made you smile? 
What is the word that only certain people would understand?
What is the word that you've never said before and are scared to?
What is the phrase that would only mean something from a certain person.
We all might be different, but there is on phrase that some people want to hear and some hate hearing it. 
I love you.

© 2012 Balletmonster


Author's Note

Balletmonster
I dont...know..don't ask....:) Please review.

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Agree with the comments below...good effort!

I think you should be saying "what is the phrase"

The end seems to contradict the main body as others have pointed out.

Good poem though. Well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lovely poem, well written and ponderous in a gentle manner. I enjoyed reading this, thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very nice. The comma in the first line seems to tamper with the rhythm, so I suggest getting rid of that....Also, the line about the phrase, I think there should be a question mark there. Also, the one* thing mentioned in the previous review. Other than that, brava!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Two things. 1) Fix the second to the last sentence where it says 'on phrase' it should be 'one phrase'.

2) You should highlight the word LOVE in the last line since that word makes up the whole write.

This will make this write even better.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on June 20, 2012
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Balletmonster
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I absolutely love to write, but I am so bad at spelling and grammar. So, please forgive that. I love watching T.V. it gives me ideas of what to write about. more..

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