I do wonder

I do wonder

A Poem by Frankie
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Sometimes love comes amid many complications.

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I do wonder......

About all these feelings I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... I don't want this to end badly Since I'm in love with you so madly I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile all the more Since I crave seeing you walk through any door I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

© 2020 Frankie


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This is a great poem! Whenever you have a crush, or in love, all these "what-if's" run through our heads sometimes making it hard to think straight. With this line, "About me telling you what's in my heart, And how your reaction could tear me apart" is very powerful!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frankie

6 Months Ago

You are very kind. Nice to see you again.



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Heartache growing until the release. There's always a space for letting go. Nice job.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Franki, this is beautifully written! I loved the repeated lines! I believe a lot of people can relate to this poem!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KATHY SUE SILLS

1 Month Ago

My pleasure!
Frankie

1 Month Ago

I need the encouragement.... thanks again.
KATHY SUE SILLS

1 Month Ago

It was really good!
Perfectly captures the anxiety, infatuation, and fear of rejection of a crush

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frankie

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much! You are so kind.
Heartfelt and written with emotion!

Posted 3 Months Ago


This was such a lovely read and so full of feeling! Sometimes the wondering is more uncomfortable than the final answer.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frankie

4 Months Ago

Thank you Cori. I wrote this while very much in love with a co worker. It didn't end well.
WOW!! Love the rhyme scheme, This is so good. but all the what if's that could be.
This is amazing, so well expressed and powerful as well

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frankie

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind encouragement. That means a lot.
This is a great poem! Whenever you have a crush, or in love, all these "what-if's" run through our heads sometimes making it hard to think straight. With this line, "About me telling you what's in my heart, And how your reaction could tear me apart" is very powerful!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frankie

6 Months Ago

You are very kind. Nice to see you again.
Sweet poem, just have to believe good things are coming..

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet poem, I'd say take a chance. Regret it not fun.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frankie

10 Months Ago

Well.....I did take the chance. This was a really life situation. But it didn't end the way I wa.. read more
Tina

10 Months Ago

Sorry about that
Lovely poem. I like the rhythm of the words. It’s easy to see you write with much emotion…straight from your heart in this poem. Great write!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frankie

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much Suzanne.

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