I love the way love is portrayed in this poem; the differences in the reactions, the knowing, the start to finish. When you know, you know and I honestly believe in most situations we know! I was able to envision the looks, the expressions, the gestures. Even writing this review I can picture each face. Well done!
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Month Ago
Oh my! Thank you! It was completely fiction but it flowed somehow. I appreciate you reading th.. read moreOh my! Thank you! It was completely fiction but it flowed somehow. I appreciate you reading this. Very kind.
When it happens it happens. If one feels that way but the other doesn't, it can ruin a friendship. But if you feel sure it's for both of you, then why not? Like Lisa, I found the font a little distracting, but I could read it, so no great problem. The poem itself is fine. I enjoyed the read.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
Is it the font color, or the font itself? I could change it easily.
1 Year Ago
I think it's the font itself. Although it is in bold type it looks slightly blurry to my eyes.
I find this easier to read, personally. I wear spectacles and I think that makes a difference in tha.. read moreI find this easier to read, personally. I wear spectacles and I think that makes a difference in that bright, heavy text can sometimes look slightly blurred. This font is nice and clear.
Since i never heard back from you regarding my honest review I can only assume that I offended you... Which of course was not my intention...
If so I am sorry.
Lisa, now in Spain
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
I apologize. I am not offended. I'm curious though, Is the font distracting or the color of the p.. read moreI apologize. I am not offended. I'm curious though, Is the font distracting or the color of the print?
1 Year Ago
Hi there,
Sorry for such a long delay in responding to you.
Just now saw that you resp.. read moreHi there,
Sorry for such a long delay in responding to you.
Just now saw that you responded to me... but I never got it...so weird... I should have received a message....Anyway, no the color is not distracting...
I just felt that you could have used a different font and perhaps made it a bit larger. I felt there was too much separation between your lines and that because you used no punctuation I also felt that although I liked the poem...using punctuation would have made your words more powerful.
Please let me know your thoughts,
Lisa, now in Spain
I know that this encouragment from you is helping me to want to continue writing.
sometimes.. read moreI know that this encouragment from you is helping me to want to continue writing.
sometimes hurtful or thoughtless comments can make some want to quit. So thank you!!
1 Year Ago
I understand completely and you're welcome! I hope you continue writing because I want to keep readi.. read moreI understand completely and you're welcome! I hope you continue writing because I want to keep reading.
The uncertainty between two friends, a friendship growing into something more, blossoming into a new relationship. You capture that intital awkwardness between two people, who have feelings for each other but who are unsure how to show it to the other person. In the end, they knew it was going to happen, the chemistry is there. Beautifully written!
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
You.nailed it. That's what I wanted to show. Thanks!!
Although, I liked your words and definitely relate, I found it rather difficult to read because of the font you used and also because there is no punctuation...
I hope I have not offended you, and if so I am sorry...that is not my intention...
I just want to be 100% honest when leaving a review...especially if I really like the poem..
I feel this is important..
Just saying "Oh I love it" or " What a great poem" is not always good..
Lisa, now in Spain
I need a space to share my writings so i can grow as a writer. I mostly write short stories, but I'm working on a book about a serious family saga.
I used to be with writerscafe from about 2009 to.. more..