The walk we have taken

i dont generally write swearing, but hey, i feel strongly about it : ) i might change the word eventually..lol

Walk, walk walk.
And theyd talk talk talk.
Just cos we held hands.
Her fingers through mine, a strong hold.
But didnt that other girl do it?
That one that wore the bright pink warmers
And smoked a pack of f**s a day
Didnt she hold hands and get away with it?


Smile smile smile
and theyd wait a while while while
Til we were strolling home, just talking thats all.
And theyd walk through the traffic, just to yell names
But what have we done? I keep a face straight
As straight as i cant be
Whats the problem with my innerself?
Must i hide..?

And theyd point point point
And theyd scream scream scream
With laughter
"You dirty b***h" and i could see beths face squirm
Shed fight and not be sorry, just to shut them up
Girls, not just boys
Surely we arent competition?
But they feel threat, and they get mad. But i wont regret.
No i wont regret the way she makes me feel.

A circle of them them them
Prowling with words like ice, and fingers like knives
Theyll make a move any moment,
How good for them would it be, that they picked a fight with a lesbian?
Like an antler head, theyd hold our pain high
And inside they want me to die, but i hold on
Cos its her im breathing for, i stay strong
Inside i am feeling, inside i am reeling, from their words
But i stay strong, shes what matters, its all for her

My baby and me, and a couple of chums
But some stay quiet and move around soon
But noone pays notice, cos its all me and beth
The lesbian couple, who they saw get tounged in the school hall
And the rumours they start, but i wont fall apart
Cause shes what i want, and shes what matters
F**k them. I can stay strong.

Author's Note

Ignore what you dont like, but its how i feel.

Reviews

[Aristophanes]

I like the flow of this poem... but we can work on the imagery... to create more depth... but it's a great exercise of language... nicely done!!!

[reca-becca]

I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!! I really do! thats exactly how I feel about thos f*****g b******s who judge people by their sexual nature! F**k them is right! And good for you for writting this and good for you for staying strong! I'm happy that you feel that way just like me! and screw the people who don't feel the same! You keep staying strong and remember that you can fight them and beat the f****n' s**t out of them! (pardon my french but thats how strongly I feel about this!) Your Go Girls!!!!!! keep fighting hard and writting as well as this!
love,
reca-becca xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo