A Poem by Lenard L. Banks III

I'm just trying new ideas here.

                                         Broken Heart.
             Broken Dreams.
                                                            Broken Home.
                                                Broken Faith.
                                    Broken Promises.
                                                    Broken Spirit.
                        Broken Relationship.
                                      Broken Pockets.

                 All these things were broken under pressure trying to leave him in bind,
               One thing that remains strong, free and unbroken is his unbreakable

© 2015 Lenard L. Banks III

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Very strong use of words led to strong ending. A unbreakable mind is needed. Thank you Lenard for sharing your amazing poetry.

Posted 2 Years Ago

This poem is so simple, and yet so beautiful, all packaged inside 16 words and 2 sentences. I'm glad to be able to call you a friend

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Posted 8 Years Ago

Raw, fractured, and broken open. nicely written and well portrayed. Hopefully the mind can figure out a way to stay strong while he puts it all back together...

Ps. Thanks for your review, sorry it took me so long to return the favor!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Once again, Lenard, gritty and wonderful. My favorite kind!

Posted 8 Years Ago

I had no idea, before I read this, that you could right poems in such a way. (Im still young, much to learn) I found it interesting, and kind of fun :) The words were powerful and even though it was simplistic, it was meaningful, well done :D

Posted 8 Years Ago

I enjoyed this very much! I found it so simple and direct that it was sooo refreshing! The approach was delightful. Very good!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Awesome. I love your direct approach to poetry. Powerful strong and clear! Brilliant.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Honestly, let me know what you think of this new poem??

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on February 28, 2011
Last Updated on February 20, 2015


Lenard L. Banks III
Lenard L. Banks III

Dallas, TX

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