Frozen Souls

Frozen Souls

A Poem by Barbara Borel

Two souls frozen in time
my heart is yours and yours is mine

Sweet kisses, long strolls
longing to hear of storied told

Cathedral NOLA music and art
I knew you forever from the very start

When I wake up from this dream, delusion might it be, fate will be told if these blind eyes may see
-BMB2017

© 2017 Barbara Borel


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What's for ya sure won't pass ya by Barbara. Your Prince will come one day, as sure as eggs are eggs and before your life is ova...psst, see what I did there. 2017, the year of smiley Barbara, remember..

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Barbara Borel

7 Years Ago

Thank you🤗🤗🤗🤗
I think 'fate will tell...' would scan a bit better Barbara since fate usually is the one that does the 'telling'.
I loved the line ~
'I knew you forever from the very start'...'

:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Barbara Borel

7 Years Ago

Fate will tell. It does flow better
The last line explains the hope in the first 2 lines. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


Barbara Borel

7 Years Ago

It's a chaotic dance in my head . Yes no real delusion . A planned life that may never manifest

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Barbara Borel
Barbara Borel

Metairie , LA



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Born and raised in New Orleans. Use words as a way of expressing myself. I dont write for an audience or to get praise or please anyone. Writing is therapy. In my eyes expressing words in paper... th.. more..

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