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A Story by Barry!

The Vicious Circle

 

 

BEWARE

 

 

These Words May Bite

© 2008 Barry!


Author's Note

Barry!
- I got a million of 'em, hot cha cha cha cha!

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Barry, this is amazingly funny, the entire image, with the picture of the monkey, its simple
yet well written, and is vivid in its originality, for some reason, one of the funniest poems
i have read in a while, only becuase of the wording employed with the graphic, and to image
the entire scenerio, very nice job on this one, can't wait to read more of these.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I certainly appreciate all the kind words here... but... as you know... I didn't even come in second.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Barry, this is amazingly funny, the entire image, with the picture of the monkey, its simple
yet well written, and is vivid in its originality, for some reason, one of the funniest poems
i have read in a while, only becuase of the wording employed with the graphic, and to image
the entire scenerio, very nice job on this one, can't wait to read more of these.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LoL .. love the author's note.
I like this one best myself .. of the other two which are great .. this speaks to me more so
Chloe
xoxo

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Leave it as is Barry!.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I dunno... what about paring it down to: "Words That Bite"... I'm still thinkin'.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Ah good -- I was thinking of trying for something like this too. Glad someone else did!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

LOL That is fun!!! Well done. I enjoyed that. Cheers.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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