Time

Time

A Poem by Lauren_The_Awesome

Tick tock, Tick tock
Seconds, minutes, hours
Time is so precious
Life is so precious
So why waste it?
Why not risk take?
Questions left unanswered
By those oblivious of their situation
We can't wallow in our sorrows
We can't be consumed by the inevitable
What ever happens, happens 
But we can't be guilty of what did not happen
Unleft conversations
Left to be paused and never be touched again
The hardest part about life is time
We don't know how much time we have
But we do have a say so of how we use it
Time is always ticking
Tick tock
Tick tock

© 2017 Lauren_The_Awesome


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I do believe time is our most valuable access. Time go too fast and we can miss the good days lost. I tell people. Do at least nice thing for yourself daily. Life isn't always running and working.. I liked the movement and the reason for the poem. Thank you Lauren for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lauren_The_Awesome

2 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Lauren.



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I loved reading this. Your're so creative. Keep writing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lauren_The_Awesome

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
I do believe time is our most valuable access. Time go too fast and we can miss the good days lost. I tell people. Do at least nice thing for yourself daily. Life isn't always running and working.. I liked the movement and the reason for the poem. Thank you Lauren for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lauren_The_Awesome

2 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Lauren.
Correct, very well conveyed the importance of time..every minute is the mystery..
We don't know how much we have..very good job.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lauren_The_Awesome

2 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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The more fun the quicker it seems to pass, the sadder the slower, and at the end of our allotted period some miserable old b*****d in Black reaping what ya father sowed

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Lauren_The_Awesome

2 Years Ago

yes very true.
Time Is indeed fleeting and many people refuse to accept it thus holding grudges and harbouring resentment. Perhaps we only do those things because we have deluded ourselves that we will have surplus time to make amends. An excellent read and a very thought provoking piece which had me questioning my own morality. :) well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Lauren_The_Awesome

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
Skib

2 Years Ago

anytime :)

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I'm an upcoming writer that hopes one day to succeed. I write mostly poems about my past and the present. My inspiration comes from experience in my life and certain music that makes my mind go into a.. more..

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