Loud Silence

Loud Silence

A Poem by Lauren_The_Awesome
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https://youtu.be/pUlX8ltm_JU

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Getting back on my own two feet
Hard to do
As without him
It's just gloom
He was my savior
My glue
Protecter of all
No exclusion
As with him
It was peace
He is gone
Living peacefully
But here on earth
It hurts
To think of him
To reminisce
In the memories
Just wishing for him to come back
To come in open arms
Telling me it's okay
That he's back
It hurts to think
It hurts to say
There's emptiness 
And silence
Very loud silence

© 2017 Lauren_The_Awesome


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Lauren_The_Awesome
https://youtu.be/pUlX8ltm_JU

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I wondered if it was your boyfriend or brother or father who passed when first reading this. I then saw your reply below.

If we're lucky, a father is the glue that holds a family together. He takes care of his family any way he knows how. I'm sorry for your loss. You express yourself well in this moving poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lauren_The_Awesome

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the nice review.



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This is a poem clearly expressing the pain of losing a dear loved one.

May The Creator give you strength to carry on living your life with love and great purpose.

WELL DONE

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wondered if it was your boyfriend or brother or father who passed when first reading this. I then saw your reply below.

If we're lucky, a father is the glue that holds a family together. He takes care of his family any way he knows how. I'm sorry for your loss. You express yourself well in this moving poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lauren_The_Awesome

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the nice review.
Even in the silent moments our memories can be clearly heard echoing in our hearts, for the person of our attentions! Poignant and poetic piece - an easy to relate to write! :-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lauren_The_Awesome

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the nice review :)
A heartbreaking poem, Lauren. I feel your sadness and longing in every word. You have a gift for putting your emotions into lines.

"He is gone
Living peacefully
But here on earth" - These lines struck me. Even though we break up with someone, they're still around us. There's no escape sometimes and you've illustrated that very brilliantly with these lines.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lauren_The_Awesome

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the nice review. However I didn't break up with someone, it was written because I am t.. read more
Michael (Letters and Lifelines)

2 Years Ago

Oh I am very sorry to hear that. I just interpreted as a break up when I read it, but I see now what.. read more
Lauren_The_Awesome

2 Years Ago

It's okay. Thank you.

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Added on October 9, 2017
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I'm an upcoming writer that hopes one day to succeed. I write mostly poems about my past and the present. My inspiration comes from experience in my life and certain music that makes my mind go into a.. more..

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