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A Poem by Kenneth Richardson

Take me to the city
Life will be here when we get back

© 2014 Kenneth Richardson


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because sometimes
we need something new and exciting
huge and terrifying
refreshing and inviting
it's not that something's wrong with where I am
it's that something's right where I'm not
and I have to go there
if only for a day
because horizons are meant to be expanded
and my muse refuses to be fed by the hum drum
lest it be left in the doldrums
of what has become ordinary
it's craving something contrary
and it's the perfect sunrise for a car ride
we'll be headed back on a sunset
pack a couple things
release all your dreams
strap on some wings
and fly with me
life will be here when we get back

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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kenneth Richardson

9 Years Ago

Yeah, you totally captured the feeling I was going for! I love this!



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because sometimes
we need something new and exciting
huge and terrifying
refreshing and inviting
it's not that something's wrong with where I am
it's that something's right where I'm not
and I have to go there
if only for a day
because horizons are meant to be expanded
and my muse refuses to be fed by the hum drum
lest it be left in the doldrums
of what has become ordinary
it's craving something contrary
and it's the perfect sunrise for a car ride
we'll be headed back on a sunset
pack a couple things
release all your dreams
strap on some wings
and fly with me
life will be here when we get back

I was inspired to add this.
Did this expand the essence of your idea?
Or was it totally unrelated and missing the point?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kenneth Richardson

9 Years Ago

Yeah, you totally captured the feeling I was going for! I love this!

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Added on August 6, 2014
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Tags: Love, life, city, teen, escape

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Kenneth Richardson
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New York, NY



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