Dishwasher

Dishwasher

A Poem by Scarlet Pulse

This argument

Wasn’t like any other

About the silliest of things

Washing the dishes and when.

My eyes swelled with a smile

“Our first grown up fight”

These were the words he spoke

Little as it was

That moment assured me

He is mine

And

Will be

Forever

© 2010 Scarlet Pulse


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Its amazing how the simplest things can be come amazing with the right words. Although its a matter of opinion, one thing I recommend is dropping most punctuation unless it is used for emphasis. It is poetry, not grammar. I try to only use punctuation when is appealing in appearance, not for grammatical perposes. But well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


That was sweet

Posted 14 Years Ago


May such a minor incident be the norm. This one made me smile with its inocence.

Posted 14 Years Ago


THIS IS EXCELLENT WRITING MY FRIEND - YOU ARE A CREATIVE ANOMALY AND IT'S OBVIOUS THAT WORDS DELIGHT IN YOUR COMPANY.
PLEASE JOIN OUR INTERNATIONAL COMMUNITY OF WRITERS AND ARTISTS AT: thepoeticminds.ning.com (poetry, literature and dreams) WHERE YOU CAN LIGHT UP OUR MARQUEE WITH YOUR BOLD AND MAGICAL WORDS OF INVENTION!

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved it, It made me smile at the end. Short poems like this are amazing. It is very well written. :]

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love is present in every conversation when it is strong and true. I enjoyed this poem because it focused on just how that happens even in disagreement. Another title - Dish Enchanted ?

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 26, 2010
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Scarlet Pulse
Scarlet Pulse

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