Pretty

Pretty

A Poem by Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen
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Music inspiration. "Pretty" By Kidneythieves.

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"I love you, pretty"

That's all that I can hear

As I'm alone and feeling ugly

In the world of my despair

 

My heart bleeds on paper

For the one and only, you

Too much hurt inside me

The hell you've put me through

 

Monsters in my closet

Haunting inside my mind

You've known the hate I've been dealt

In a world so dark and unkind

 

What do I deserve?

The beauty of life or pain

As I hide my flowing tears

Hiding in the misty rain

 

 

Wonder what it's like to be pretty...

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen


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all the pretty thing is so respective... it is said by all and in truth those soth-sayers themselves wonder about prettiness. Ha! world is such a place of irony! i myself is spelbound at your word's beauty and wonder what it is like to write such a beautiful poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I really loved the way this was written, sharp clear detail which
described the inspired meaning, tragic beauty defined as a soul
reflection overshadowed by the darkness of words that paint
a picture with masterful detail to each stroke of the brush,
thanks for posting, its Brilliantly written, in essence to context, mike


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

all the pretty thing is so respective... it is said by all and in truth those soth-sayers themselves wonder about prettiness. Ha! world is such a place of irony! i myself is spelbound at your word's beauty and wonder what it is like to write such a beautiful poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What's so good about being pretty when you can be the beauty that you are. Beauty is not an external thing, but an internal thing. You art shows how beautiful you are. This is really well written. Many cheers.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes the prettiest of words come from the darkest of places. I won't say nice job, because everyone says "nice job." I will, however, tell you that it could not have been written better. Personally, I wouldn't change a thing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

well...it sounds pretty! =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Poignant ... beautifully written ....

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

oh sweet and wonderful. it felt like a thought that some one was thinking, dancing with rhythm. this had a very good rhythm to it. this was really good. good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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