Young Girl's Affliction

Young Girl's Affliction

A Poem by Aliciaa Gay.

Written for Kayla=] I love you hun

Useless argument
Controlling game
Endless jealousy
Driving each other insane
Lying to get a point across
Cheat at the game
Never once caring
Always replacing the blame.
She’s running to friends
Making it worse than it is
He sounds abusive
But she’s not ashamed
He never once hit her
So who’s to blame.
Arguing to make peace
Only makes it worse
But she couldn’t care
She isn’t the one who’s hurt worse
Always hiding
Afraid of what she’ll say
Never once
Trying to face the day
Problems are ongoing
Fighting never stops
She’s running his life
And he’s giving up the fight
Never getting along
It’s a lost cause
Why should he care
It was all a game of dare
Time apart
Makes this right
At least they tried
They won’t just give in
The want this life
Working for the better
No longer placing blame
Everything is working out
They are both to blame.

© 2011 Aliciaa Gay.

Author's Note

Aliciaa Gay.
Conversation leading to this poem=]

Kayla: about my friend. i know you dont her but basically about overly jealous who says when he yells its okay hes just mad and it makes her sound like shes been abused even when she hasn't. basically just about jealousy and controlling ness in a relationship

Me: sounds like me and john used to be. but now that we are back together our relationship seems a lot better. there are still a lot of kinks that need to be worked out but he's trying and so am i. I've never felt closer to him than i do now.

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I loved reading this, i read it twice :'3

Posted 9 Years Ago

This was amazing, I liked a lot.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I like this alot, I love how strong this poem is. Great job (:

Posted 9 Years Ago

very powerful

Posted 9 Years Ago

You wrote! That's good. I'm glad, and it was to help someone else too, even better!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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