Poetic Death

Talent unrenowned
Learning to hit
While your opponents is down
Fair fighting
Is what is said
How much longer will you push me
Until I slit my wrists
And let it end.
~*~
Love like winter
Is easier to say
Than it ever held to be true
Slowly consuming
In spite the hue
Killing me softly
Laying here with you
~*~
Biggest inspiration
Failure to some
It does not stop me
From helping him run
Playing bad guy
He plays it safe
Risking my life
It won’t end this way
~*~
No room to talk
You hurt just as bad as me
Everything I do is wrong
every wind that blows
Slowly helps you break me
Lies that were told
Hidden in dread
How will it feel
When it chooses to end
~*~
Consuming my being
Eating my core
Taking me over
My soul and more
Playing these mind games
My disorder holds the strings
Nothing is left
But nothingness of insanity.
~*~
Talent unrenowned
Learning to hit
While your opponents is down
Fair fighting
Is what is said
How much longer will you push me
Until I slit my wrists
And let it end.

Author's Note

Don't hold strong opinions about things you don't understand.

Reviews

[Chris]

I really like how each line connects to the other. Each line flows smoothly into the next, not just through words, but the ideas they carry as well.
Relevance-its consistancy is one of your strongest points.

[Jess Holden]

I may not understand parts, but still wonderful :)

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ALl i can is don't listen to what people tell you. Write what you want.
Powerful write.

[Chloe]

Ignorance is our most prevalent disease and unfortunately, the cure is far and few between because people refuse to go out and seek the knowledge to the things the don't understand. It leaves the ones who's eyes are open to the world feeling alone because the rest of the world can't see the truth for what it is. Fantastic write, don't give up spreading the truth!

[CharlesMonroe]

This is so powerful, and I agree with your authors note, I hate when people form an oppinion on something they know nothing about. The poem is layed out beautifully.. great job :3

[CharlesMonroe]

This is so powerful, and I agree with your authors note, I hate when people form an oppinion on something they know nothing about. The poem is layed out beautifully.. great job :3

[WynterPhoenix]

I love this one. Don't listen to others trying to tell you what you can or can't write about. "Creativity takes courage." You are brave enough to post this and that alone is inspiration.

[Alicia Hirshey]

I am not writing about anything that is to far off or that most of them have not done or experienced themselves. I don't mean to be rude but you don't have to read my poetry. Nobody does. But I will not change what i post from its original form for anybody.