Foolish Masquerade

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Foolish masquerade
You put on quite a show
Leaving me to think
My flaws would never show
Marked me a martyr
Bury me in your sin
Hide your foolish longing
So your demons could not get in
Mask your heart with hatred
Deceit in it's lies.
Who are we to judge
You hold the pain inside
Ex's frame the woodwork
Crawling in your skin
What makes it any different now
From what it was then?
Endless transgression
Mark it as you please
I will not keep letting you
Play these games with me
Fighting unknowing
Hide it within myself
You back me up
Your life will surely melt
Who are we to play
This game built for two
Find yourself a hooker
If my heart will not due.
foolish masquerade
You put on quite a show
Leaving me to think
My flaws would never show

Author's Note

You claim to hate her, that she treated you like shit. But you still loved her, now you are over her and with me, so why bring her back now? This is causing problems and your are to foolish to see. I will leave you before I let this hurt me.

Reviews

[Spookers]

Very strong.

[☯]

A strong and powerful poem. The emotions and hate swirl together as I read on and the feelings you put into this actually speak and snarl. The hate and message you send through is amazing. Great write.

[I Am Svetlana]

I really like the strong messages that you convey in your poetry, along with the inmagery. Everyone will see and/or treat us differently than one another. We never seem to rememeber the message: "Treat others the way you'd like to be treated". The world is all different now.

[∂αʌ<..]

strong and pwerful poem..showing your anger and bitterness...

[RedInk524]

Strong flames spit from your words. If a guy isnt treating you right, or isnt being faithful, then just leave him. Do not waste your time with something that isnt worth it.

[Helpless]

insanely cool!!

[Kayla K]

This is one of your best, I believe. Loved it.

[joshua deathdealer]

A very strong and intense write here. I love it!! Ex's frame the woodwork!!

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this. It's so strong, and raw and beautiful. And don't let him get to you Ali, you're stronger than that! If he isn't happy with you then let him suffer for loosing you. It'll be okay dear, way to good for him