Thoughts Of A Hurting Poet

Thoughts Of A Hurting Poet

A Poem by Miss Marie Riorden.
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Just....I don't know...

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Tearing down foundations built upon dreams so fragile and weak

Believing in ideas that shall fail, that are nothing but meek

Shoving force-fed lies down my throat, you want me to see

What you've told me, shackled chains, curled up gripping my knees

I am trapped down this well of desperation, a pit of destruction

Reluctance so strong within blood that spills, no reconstruction

Heart with sewn up patches, needles looped through the center

A huge sign written in blood, across my chest "do not enter."

Sinful are the thoughts that race through my head,  my heart

Just short of leaving their ugly marks, and tearing me apart

Shortened is the fuse that's lit inside my temper about to fail

A plane in the sky destined to fall, a ship that is to never sail

Wishing I could stop what it is humanity fails to look for

Something that could be held, hoping for something more

Hurting as deep, a festering wound infected with hate

Nothing to done about it, it's a little too late

To show anyone what's happened to this girl, this toy

Who's been broken by so many different boys

She only wishes for one thing, to feel the touch of care

To take the adrenaline, to take the dare

Jump off the ledge of sanity, dive into an ocean of sorrow

Leave them for wondering what life brings tomorrow

© 2012 Miss Marie Riorden.


Author's Note

Miss Marie Riorden.
From the heart...if you don't like it, I don't fucking care.

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I loved this poem. I could feel the pain in it. I love reading poems that hold emotions. It makes me feel like I could feel what the writer is feeling. I know this is from the heart and it was painful and beautiful at the same time. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I f****n Sang it BAHA !

Posted 3 Years Ago


I loved this poem. I could feel the pain in it. I love reading poems that hold emotions. It makes me feel like I could feel what the writer is feeling. I know this is from the heart and it was painful and beautiful at the same time. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked the following lines:

Heart with sewn up patches, needles looped through the center
A huge sign written in blood, across my chest "do not enter."

Very descriptive, this is a good write...shows pain and sadness.....

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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