The Kingdom of Gold
A Book by Beentothemoon
 Within one of the major kingdoms, a tyrant has risen to power. On the 78th year of his rule, two slaves and their children catch his interest. "It's about damn time I see some real challengers here."  © 2020 Beentothemoon
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I would like it if you would all first focus on what I've done WRONG rather than what I did right. I've heard several times that the dialogue is the main issue but not much else. If you could point out other issues, that would be highly appreciated.
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BeentothemoonDhaka, Bangladesh
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I'm a young, aspiring Author with tons of stories I want to write. Some are worse than others, but that's to be expected. more..
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